|Watch out, her jumpsuit may be violent.|
Wednesday, 1 August 2012
She was wearing a violent jumpsuit...
The kind of jumpsuit that'd banjo you if it saw you.
Aim a karate chop to your throat.
Kick your head in.
Strike you down.
At least it would have been a violent jumpsuit if I hadn't noticed it during editing my novel.
You see, that's why editing's so essential. Without it, you make mistakes and if a publisher/agent/reader spots that mistake, they will start to doubt every single word they read.
Editing that novel or article can be a lengthy process, but it's a vital one unless you want a woman in a violent jumpsuit instead of a violet one.
Look out for words you use excessively often. Me, I'm a just gal. With most words, you can delete them or replace them. It may help to use a word cloud or a tool that counts the instances of words.
Speech marks. Decide on single or double and stick to that. Give yourself a style guide and stick to that.
The more descriptive the words the better. For instance, trudge is better than walk, mumble is better than talk quietly. Are there words you can replace for better words?
Do you have speech tags for every, single bit of dialogue? You shouldn't need to say 'he says/she says' all the time. Often you can let people know who's speaking with them doing something. For instance - Sally wheezed. 'I'm giving up the cigarettes.'
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